What i would change

When looking on our performance it did go really well and i am glad of what work we produced. However, to of made me more confident of the performance i would of changed or added more text to the bingo scene. It was taking a risk that scene because, it could either go really well or it could of gone really wrong. We had to work really hard in order to make sure the performance was good. 

What i would of changed was maybe the bingo numbers and some of the text. Because i felt the text did slow the scene down. It was hard to get a flow with the numbers and having different text in the middle. I maybe would of developed the text to introduce my self and the relationship with the bingo players. i felt the scene was too rushed and not enough time to introduce everyone to the audience. I felt the characters could of be more involved with talking to the audience. I wanted to make the audience feel more involved like they were actually there playing bingo. 

Also the scene near the end after the bedroom scene i would of changed. I felt that it wasn't developed enough and it was rushed. We didn't really focus on how to get the audience out the space they were all a bit confused with what was going on .  Also some of  the audience couldn't see what was going on at the top because there view was restricted.